Sorry I've taken so long to reply!
I did read it while you were on holiday but I didn't get time to reply until now
Anyway, this chapter was a very edge-of-your-seat one
The way you handled the end of the chapter was awesome too, a cliff-hanger if ever there was one
As for theme tunes, I was talking to Splat on MSN when he mentioned it to me and I made a suggestion.
I think Within Temptation's
What Have You Done works as a good theme song for the events between Stivik and Dionysia, in particular
this chapter
As with any theme song, there's some things that don't exactly match, but I thought it was a pretty good one