No, I like this. It's good to experiment; that's how you learn!
I think that as long as you know where you're going when you start, how the story's going to end, then you're ok. It's fun to experiment with how to get there, and if you look back and don't like something, you can still edit it; just tell people you're doing it.
And another cool chapter; very mysterious. Who is that girl?
I guess this mysterious figure at the end of the character is 01.