I would like to know who designed the whip and told the wolvark that it's covered in nano-injectors... Aside from that, you pinned the law enforcer guy's attitude very well.
Edit: I just noticed that it says that he had to drag that guy about ten miles... But he seems to have dragged him eleven...
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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Last edited by Oddey; 02-10-2010 at 04:01 AM..
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