I think I know what some of the problems here may be. This is going to be very intense critique, so if you aren't prepared for a very harsh verbal beatdown, please stop reading.
Firstly mudokon limbs are slack, but not that slack. There's a bit more muscle in the arms and legs. There's something odd about the hands along with the feet. Now the texturing is a bit too blueish. Abe is mostly purple really, just blent in very well with blue and green. His eyes aren't quite the orange bloodshot ones he has in the original game. Torso looks pretty good from here, and the head needs no changes, other than perhaps the eyes.
All that horrible stuff said, it's definately Abe I see in that picture. Quite a good likeness.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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