The dagger queen roach hearts is very similar to the Antlion commandy thingy though. I've not sure what it's called, but most of that chapter sounds remarkably similar to Half-Life 2.
Critique from me is a good thing. It shows I care enough to give it out. Unless it doesn't need any.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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