[arkaznor]

Right, so I finally got caught up with the story again, after being gone for several months; and I gotta say Damn Splat.

This story is what encouraged me to take a look at my character that my brother had used and set lose in the world of W@RF, and inspired me to actual think of what made that butchered character tick.It is also what made me excited to try and write my own story for Ark (which sadly fell apart rather quickly, but never mind that).

Your writing is compelling with most of it driven with dialog and action rather than description, and it works beautifully with nothing becoming over dull by excessive detail.

While I tried to read through all of W@RF, I stopped at some parts and jump past others, making it so that I never got a clear idea of what or why things happened the way they did. Reading these last few chapters, and the thoroughly helpful links, gives me a welcome glimpse into the world that captivates me so.

Bravo Splat, continue the great work.