*Shrieks with girlish glee* That is awesome! I love Anni's innocent expression; she's so cute! \^_^/ (My manliness! AARRRRGGHHHH!!) That's the face that has Dean, Javi and Kix under her spell, and has been the bane of many a slig.
And you really captured Dionysia fabulously, pinned down her personality brilliantly. I can see her glaring at Stivik with that look as he laughs at her name
. I dunno how you got her expression so perfect: she's arrogant but there's that vulnerability in her. You are amazing, Sci!
They're both great; their clothes and feathers are brilliant. Loads better than I could ever have hoped for! Their expressions rock and they look great!
They're both a bit more grown up by the time Dionysia comes to Rupture Farms but never mind that; it's brilliant. Made my Christmas
I can't get over how amazing they look.
Fan-art of my fan-story is the best idea EVAH!!! I love seeing how you guys see my characters, and I think you got them really close to my vision.
Also, the background rocks, too. Wheee!!!
Stivik doesn't necessarily have a super-modern mask, though his gun's pretty cool in a discreet sort of way. That's the thing; he's discreet. But he does have that spider-webby scar on his left shoulder (I think it's left, from his battle in the prologue) and a couple of spooce-burns, maybe. Or something. Did I say he was tall? I dunno, i probably wouldn't say that now. It's tough describing sligs. They don't really vary that much. My mudokon W@RF character was pretty non-descript, too. The stuff on his 'belt' is Stivik's give-away, really. And Nick would probably be greasy and carrying tools.
Maybe Havoc could tell more.
I would love to see Kix; I have quite a clear picture of her in my head from when she first met Anni, but it'd be cool to see how others see her.
So yeah, next Tuesday I will post a little thingy about the conception of Dionysia, though it probably won't be that exciting, not in the least because I don't remember all of the details.
W@RF posts to go with previous chapter:
One and
Two. That is where Anni starts to grow up, starts taking responsibility. And yeah, it was Math in the RPG instead of Javi.