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12-13-2009, 09:41 PM
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sigh...

Jimmy? First, a while back you spelt Vykker wrong again. Second, instead of 'had to shoot something', try 'have to shoot something'. Third, you said 'he roses slightly his arms', when it should've been 'he rose his arms slightly' or 'he slightly rose his arms'.

It's okay, everyone makes mistakes .
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