I come off as such a jerk in my comments!
I tend to be very sugary and lenient whenever I'm judging anything, so in order to keep myself from doing that I decided to think about the worst possible nit-picky things I could say about each story. In spite of that, yours fell in a close third place for me I think, not last as it would seem, Alexfili. Try to take the criticism constructively, I suppose; it's as brutally honest as I can force myself to be with something anonymous.
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