The rate that you're posting chapters, makes it a little tricky to keep up, so please excuse a few less comments.
On the actual chapter, it seems to be an ideal setup for something very bad... I can't quite put my finger on it, but it can't be good. Why has everyone else left the dormitory? What if it isn't because it's late morning? What if it's something else? Please note that these questions are not meant to be answered directly, but are what's on my mind about this.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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