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I have seen some really bad RP'ing in the time I've been here.
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*Nostalgic sigh* remember Chirpy? Or Outlaw King? We never did decide which of them won the title of 'Worst RPGer Ever'. Hyper-violence vs. downright gross. If you had to be stuck with one of them on a desert island...
Anyway, enough of my nostalgia. On with the show!
Oh, and as some advice, I'd say you don't have to repeat the last person's post when you post.
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IC: The mudokon who had followed Anni said "Whoa, whoa, whoa, calm down! I'm just wondering what your purpose is here. As in, why did you come here in the first place? "But perhaps we're starting on the wrong leg. Speaking of which..." she looked down at the wound on Mars's leg, "...we probably should get that fixed up." She looked at Anni, "I heard you saying before you might be able to bandage it up using supplies in this lab? I think the first thing to do is take care of that, then we need to get out of here before the slig on the other side of this door gets in. But what's going to happen when he frees the other slig, I don't know." She walked over to the controls to the lab door and put her palm against the panel. "I can try to slow him down though." Her hand lit up with a blue glow, but nothing like Mars's, as she pushed it into the panel. There was a fizz and then a few sparks leapt from the control panel both on the inside of the room and on the outside too. "There, the lock on the door is busted now, so they'll either have to fix it or get the door open manually. Either way, it'll buy us time." "Thanks. And the reason I'm here is because it looked like the biggest thing on Oddworld. It was huge, important...I just wanted to help out here. But it looks like all I've done is wreck everyhing." Mars slumped down and covered his face with his hands. "I'm a screw-up" he said depressingly. Mars REALLY should go. He could at any second...
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The bit in red was totally pointless. We know what just happened; we read it! Unless you're replying to something that happened a few days ago, don't worry about recapping it. That's not just to Mars; he was merely the poor victim I used in my example.
IC you... (waaaay too much Lord of the Rings recently):
Anni looked nervous at the mention of the slig in the cage and spake thus, "Uh, I'm a little worried that that slig might have seen me." She hesitated, "I mean, being seen with two natives, freeing one of them from a cage... If he saw who I am... I dunno." She looked at Hembar, "Is there anything you can do, like... like erase him memory? I just don't want him telling everyone I set him free. They seem pretty serious about catching him."
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Grace watched, mildly bemused, as the snoozer and the slig had their little fight. A few moments later, they disappeared around a corner but he could hear them and it sounded like the situation was under control. He rapped on the boss's door. "Yeah, you can come out now, if you want."
ooc: I might edit some Jim in later if I can work out where we left off.