Talk about intense. Sounds almost like a horror movie script or something. I do quite like those descriptions, and it's an interesting dilemma that Rook seems to have set himself up in. Scraper is after him in the day, while the Dark Wings are after him at night. On top of that, wasn't Rook still a blue cap? Or had he moved on to red cap? It's been a while since last time we heard from Rook and his prison adventures. And what could be driving these creatures to attack like this?
I take this as the time to say that if I forget to mention something, odds are it's fine. everything I do mention is either improvable or exceptional.
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Congratulations, Oddey, on winning FC's fanfiction competition two years running! You are clearly the man to beat!
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