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12-04-2009, 02:15 PM
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wow this chapter was really awesome! i luv how you described everything ^^

dawww come on Anni, Nick wanted to say sorry after all! ;__; x3

I also like that you didn't focus on Stivik here... the reader knows more about Stivik than the characters in the story and that creates a certain suspense... a tiny little bit like in the movies from alfred hitchcock... well at least if you keep focussing on other characters... xD


...can't wait for the next chapter n.n
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