thanx everyone ^__^
I promised the next chapter will be better didn't I?
-well I read it again and it was good... but I thought if I rewrite it it will be even better (yeah because i wanted to add a character in it... since it isn't for the competition anymore there is no 5000 words limit...
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and I wrote 2 stories for the darn competition, remember?
-anyway... I want to change both stories I want to make them that way that their plots tie in with each other... but they still will be independent stories @__@
I will first finnish this story before i upload the other one...
ah well I stop explaining you'll see when I post the next chapter... but I want to keep my promise so it may take a while because I realised that i messed the chapter up and that I have writers block xD
sry about that ^^;