That chapter was awesome XD Even with the unexpected interruption, which
was actually very useful in recalling some of the scenes that I read so long ago
I actually remembered that fight between Javi and Nick though, with Anni pretending to be all scared and upset.
I guess that was the thing Math and Kix didn't think of, he said Nick would skin her if she tried to finish it, but of course he would automatically assume she did it anyway.
I think it's pretty cool, the way you've realisticified the events of the RPG though XD I especially look forward to seeing what you do with Groll, I'm sure you'll do him justice.
AND THE STORY IS NOT STUPIDLY LONG, IT'S AWESOMELY LONG!!!!!