OOC: Yes, let's all calm down. These are fictional characters after all.
Can you really put a definition on what makes an 'ordinary' individual?
I guess Ackro's character was a bit of a Mary Sue... but still, most of the prose was alright. I don't see the harm in making him blue either.
IC: Borso wailed in panic as a Paramite came closer to him. He jammed his metal foot in it's mouth to keep it away. "Shoo Shoo!", the Paramite got the hint and let go of his leg. "Thank Ode for that!", he said, wiping his forehead with a rag. "Hey Flad! Wait up!"
Last edited by AlexFili; 11-17-2009 at 04:17 PM..
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