@Scrabtrapman: i thought that might confuse somebody with that. i personally thought it might be a but annoying if i had every line ending with 'Said______' or '_____replied'. I'll try to make it more clear who is speaking.
@MA: That's understandable. My lack of commitment to this story was probably making it hard o get noticed. I'm finally at point where i have the time to sit down and write this.
Thanks for the feedback. it really helps keep me motivated when writing. i'll try to have another chapter soon.
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