how the hell did i miss this for a month? sorry about that, when i visit FC i usually take a quick glance of the first few titles i haven't read yet. i must have gotten this mixed up with another game thread, which i don't really read.
anyway, the prologue was very engaging, and i enjoyed reading this. i like your style of writing as its distinguishable and quite refreshing. also, i became engrossed during the banter in the chopper, very realistic and i could just picture it in my head.
looks like the plot to this will get thicker as time progresses. nice one.
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