Oh... Well.. The reason I pointed out the violence, is that people usually misunderstand the fact that Glukkons do not want their mudokons to be beaten all the time.. In fact they wanna keep them ignorant to whats going on.
But you seem to have thought this out anyway, and I can see how it makes sense from your point of view
Also, no one says you have to change anything now.. Your story is fine as it is, but some of us just like to butt and give you pointers for future reference
Anyway enough talk.. Do post more of your story