OOC:
Ok... Where to begin...
@enchilado:
As one newbie to another. Hello
I know it's splat's job to correct mistakes but he won't be here until monday. So I suppose I can help you out
There where only two things I noticed
1. You can't just appear in Rupture Farms.
Most come in through FeeCo Depot (Thats how I did
.) However you could come through the entrance on the ground floor. (EDIT: Whoops. Jimmy got there first.)
2. Mars didn't use the lift
he used the stairs you came from.
Anyway that's the ugly stuff out of the way. When splat gets back i'm sure he will greet you with a comforting hand on the shoulder and a guide in the right direction
.
My advice though would be to meet up with Guekko and Krivzee since they are close to the FeeCo station entrance.
Now for my own note:
Ok. I wasn't planning on using the flashback card just yet but I feel it is relevant to the situation. The flashback will include two temporary characters:
Name: Flad's friend
Race: Slig
Name: Native
Race: Mudokon
There's also a slave mudokon but he doesn't do anything.
Hope I'm not breaking any rules here.
For this post i'm assuming Borzo is following Flad.
IC:
Flad and Borso are walking through the old part of Rupture Farms. Flad was feeling nervous about what will happen when they actually find the mudokon. He turned to borso as they walked and said "To tell you the truth... I'm glad your here. about two years ago I had a bad experience concerning a native Mud and I don't want to be around one on my own. There's also something else... at roughly the same time I've started feeling "different" around animals and Muds. I suppose it would make more sense if I just tell you what happened..." Flad began recounting his encounter with a native at Dago's Pies.
--------Flashback-------
Dago's Pies was a small meat processing factory that's business is solely determined by pies. It made all sorts of pies: Paramite, Scrab, Fuzzle...
Flad had been working here for a whole year now and had become great friends with another slig who he met shortly after accepting the job. They where both sent to patrol the stockyards where there was a single Mudokon slave.
The two sligs where talking: "...Aw common Flad you'll be back to beatin' Muds in no time. Look there's one there" Flad's friend approached the slave and hit him over the head with the butt of his gun "see it's easy you'll get it back. common lets see if your feeling better" Flad approached the slave and rose his Blunderbuss. He stopped his arms just wouldn't let him hit the Mudokon. He couldn't bring himself to do it, then suddenly Flad heard a voice in the distance. He looked in the direction the voice was coming from but couldn't see anything. The voice stopped. "Hey did you hear that?" Flad asked and looked at his friend. His friend looked "strange" his stance was different, His eyes seemed glazed. Flad had heard of the signs of possession but had never seen them before now. His friend slowly aimed his blunderbuss at Flad. Flad knew that Sligs never survived the possession process. There was only one thing he could do. He quickly aimed his blunderbuss and shot his friend in the chest killing him.
Flad then saw the native run out from the shadows away from the factory, he looked young.
Flad walked up to his friend's body lying on the ground and began to cry...
-------Back at Rupture Farms ------
"...and that's what happened. I'm no leader and I have no idea how i'm gonna react to this guy. I think it would be best for you take the lead from now on."
Flad waited for Borso to go on ahead. Hoping it wasn't a mistake to open himself to him.
OOC:
Wow what a long post
EDIT 2:
Oops spelt Borso, Borzo