Brilliant. Though the swearing is a bit much... I don't mind the excessive conversations, I get into those when I'm writing, too. Now - this swearing. Not that I mind it, but seeing as most Mudokons are actually drones, fucking isn't something most of the population would do, ever. Therefore they probably wouldn't use it as a curse... unless...
~"Sam fuck me! Now that would be horrible."
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