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11-09-2009, 10:30 AM
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Happy 100'th POST!

OOC: Guys, this is my 100th post. I'd like to thank the creator of the site, the mods who uphold justice, my friends, and everyone who's worked in some small way to make this place awesome. My first post was my profile for Mars. Heck, my name's Mars. Mars Leland Morand. Since I have such a silly name, I can use it online and people rarely ever think It's my own name. I found this site after looking on the oddworld site. I found it rather boring...until I noticed the RPGs. Now THAT's what I'm talking about! Of coarse when I joined I suffered the incredibly long wait of activation, the torture we've all endured. So when months later when I got activated, I sent myself to the best RPG on the site: W@RF. Mars the Mudoken is me. He modeled after me in every way. Yes, I do hate haircuts (unless my hair gets curly). I find it easier to play as myself. You don't have to think about the character's personality. Just do what you wanna do. Even if that means becoming Rupture Farms Most Wanted Criminal. I am proud to call myself a mudoken terrorist. Beats sitting around pulling levers. I've even made another character called Krivzee Dekim, a slig technician. He's currently running for his life with his buddy Guekko. So guys I wanted to thank you for putting up with my antics. I've triple-posted and I am sorry slig 5719. May the Gods of Olympus be at your side to help you write beautifully. So as my 100th post, I resolve to not make the mistakes I've already made. I'll make new ones !

PS: Jimmy-le-sniper? You claim in you signature that English is not your mothers tongue. Well you did make an error. At the end of your post you say ' didn't even fired a single shot. That's wrong because you did it like it happened a while ago. 'fire', is the word you're looking for, because 'fire' (in this case) means to shoot. Fired means you already did. And you were saying it was happening right now because it's after what you said before. I'm sorry if this is confusing, but there's erasing mistakes and then fixing them. So here's an example. See, writing it like: Didn't even fire a single shot: sounds better (no offense), or rather more accurate, than: didn't even fired a single shot. Alright. Now that that's finished, I'd like to show you guys the most annoying and irritating thing about me: my split personalitied thinking.

IC: Mars felt this strange feeling inside him, something of joy. Why, he had no idea. It was spontaneous and nothing had happened to cause it. Mars turned his head to Anni as she finished speaking. Mars suddenly heard footsteps, flipping around to see some slig. With very creaky pants too. He goggles looked kind of foggy...he might have a bit of trouble seeing.
Mars turned around to Anni and the snoozer. Nothing. 'Just give them a couple minutes' the reassuring voice said inside his brain. 'But what if they walk of together?' said the nervous, doubting voice. 'what, into the sunset?:P' said that annoying joking voice. 'well we have a spocebow-' started that non-caring evil voice.

'ENOUGH' Mars screamed into his brain. Well how was that supposed to help!? He just yelled at himself. Well think-yelled. Oh dear lords this is confusing...wait, ANNI!

Mars's eyes suddenly tuned on again as he stopped looking at his thoughts and at Anni. The snoozer responded to her suddenly "The boss might be aware of the situation and if he failed to regain control of his own factory's basement, it was probably by lack of means. He might also not wanted to send sligs guards down there as they would have probably been killed. But since I'm a robot, I don't care being attacked and destroyed...or scrapped (and that probably won't happen anytime soon). I think he'll be glad to have :

1°/ A more secured facility (= profit)
2°/ Meat he won't have to pay for...(= more profit)
3°/ ...and can get process and sold to get even more profit.

So either you don't mind being eaten at your work post by a dozen of hungry paramites; and believe me, I've been through their territory and they don't have much left to eat; or you are like this outlaw and have some "friend" down here that might have already tested my new high-impact explosive rounds. Or how to get paramite pies in less than 3 seconds." 'YIPEE!' Mars thought happily. 'If the snoozer wants to kill the paramites he'll be away from Anni...killing innocent creatures...right......CURSE MY CONSCIENCE! '

Mars tiptoed next to Anni, attempting to get in the shadows in front of her, since coming from behind would scare her. Mars used years of sneaking power for the perfect tiptoe, a combination of speed and silence, to get to Anni. When he was in the perfect spot, he came a bit out of the shadows, saying softly and calmly "I'm on your side".

OOC: There are more voices where that came from. I am sorry, but most things in my life are decided by the ruckus of thoughts arguing in my head. At least I finally did this.


And ya, 100 posts For The Win.
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