I have to admit I've never actually played Munch but
http://oddworldlibrary.net/archives/...=CAMO0007.jpg1
http://oddworldlibrary.net/archives/...=RAMO0030.jpg1 I like this visor in the ads much more than the one in the games...not to mention the sketch has a steampunkness to the legs which I quite dig.
http://oddworldlibrary.net/archives/...=RAMO0092.jpg4
http://oddworldlibrary.net/archives/...=RAMO0052.jpg2
http://oddworldlibrary.net/archives/...=RAMO0152.gif6 the actual in-game visor also seems to have some extra detail there
good stuff anyways, digged your short too...keep on working on your animations