Whoo, new chapter! I don't remember a lot of this stuff, but then it was years ago I actually read the first parts of WARF so that's not surprising
But that makes it twice as interesting reading these chapters XD
Oh, and I have proof I've read the whole thing too; there were a couple of typos - mainly it looks like you put "has" instead of "had" a couple of times and this sentence didn't make much sense to me:
"Rupture Farms had huge stockyards which covered more ground than the stockyards itself"
Did you mean "Rupture Farms had huge stockyards which covered more ground than the
factory itself"?