ooc: Abeglukkon, I can't help noting a few little problems with your profile.
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Personality:Munchman stays out of the way but gets in a fight easily. He likes people if they help him.
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You are aware that we don't just want lots of random, pointless fighting and violence in this RPG, right? Generally people who play very violent characters tend to leave RPGs very quickly because no one wants to interact with them.
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Equipment:He has a rocket blaster and a fire sword and he can use his leg to kick you.
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Where did he get these items? They're pretty unusual on Oddworld, so you need to explain why he has these and where they came from in the character's history.
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Pets: He has a fuzzle called puffball. If you get him angry then he spits fire balls.
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Again, how can this fuzzle spit fire? That also ought to be explained and you may need to make it a seperate profile.
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History: He hasn't done much through the years except train fuzzles and join the gabbit army.
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Um, how is there a 'gabbit army' when there are almost no gabbits left? Where has he trained fuzzles and why? How is it that when almost all gabbits have been slaughtered, your guy is still alive? And why is he heading to an industrial facility where there's a fair chance he'll be captured and killed, and what does he hope to achieve by coming here? All of these questions ought to be wrapped up in the character's history.
I know this means that his history will probably be pretty long, but if you want to play such an unusual character it'll need to be.
If you haven't already, PLEASE read the '
Information and Advice for RPG newbies' thread, the '
RPG Rules' thread and
this thread's first post.
If you've done all of that and made suitable revisions to your character's profile (or made a new character; whatever floats your boat), you need to post the profile here as well as in the profile thread. Then you can RPG.