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10-15-2009, 02:29 AM
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Law of conservation Stonetooth, less is better. It builds more of an atmosphere, you can show more than you tell and it's generally smoother and more graceful to read a laconic piece than a long rambly piece.

For the best example I've read of a truly laconic work read The Princess Bride. It's utterly brilliant and every word is needed.
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