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08-08-2009, 08:33 AM
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Well, I watched Wanted and I feel like I can write more creatively. Apologies if you didn't want the story to end up this way, but I decided that the story needed a bit of a dramatic change to make it more interesting. Here goes;

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Chapter 2: Popping Caps

Chapter 2: Popping Caps

Marek retaliated by shooting the paratrooper's parachute. He then spun around and shot some more paratroopers. With over half of the platoon wiped out, the paratroopers changed their tactics. They switched formation and began shooting with more ferocity. They were angry at the demise of their comrades and were prepared to do anything to get rid of the killers.

Marek's Squad was pinned down and running out of options. Yars smiled, "Need a boost?". He offered them a box of round capsules. Krisso grinned, "What do they do?". Yars read the names of the capsules, "Focus, Zoom and Jump". Reint took the Zoom capsule. Yars took the Jump capsule. Krisso and Marek took the Focus capsules. Marek smiled, "Let's go out with a bang". Reint nodded, "Wouldn't have it any other way sir". They each bit into the capsule.

The first paratrooping group of three was the first to notice something, a rush of air... the unmistakable buzz of a BlitzKnife. Yars, jumping at an unbelievable scale sliced the trooper's materials and weaponry. Yars smiled as he grabbed onto one of the troopers' parachutes and used it for himself.

Reint's eyes could see further than ever before. He looked over the hills to see more Company X airships headed their way. Reint aimed at the fuel tanks and fired, taking out five fully loaded airships in a very short space of time. Marek and Krisso finished off the rest of the troopers in record time, their bullets seemingly more accurate than before.

As the airships fell to the ground, Reint smiled, "This is the end of Company X". He took his rifle and aimed over the hills, past the great ocean and towards the Company X stronghold. He could barely see the window, but he made his shot. The bullet whizzed past the hills, over the oceans, losing speed but only being slightly affected by the wind. The shot curved slightly, went past the window... and in an instant, the head Glukkon of Company X was no more.
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