
07-03-2009, 07:56 AM
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Stunk
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: Jul 2009
: Mudos
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Rep Power: 0
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nice story
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okay heres another chapter, the spelling might be kinda bad, since I didn't check over it that much.
CHAPTER 4- Trile 1
When I entered the door and went into the trile room I noticed a long path that led upwards towards the ceiling, and there was a door at the top that led out of the trile, and I could see a couple of cages that were dangling from the ceiling. I observed the room and then I felt something cold and wet at my feet, and at that time I noticed the room was, quickly, filling up with water, I began to run up the stairs (since I didn't know how to swim). While I was running I stepped on a foot switch, which released 5 fleeches from one of the cages above, they came up to me and started trying to eat me, each time their tounges hit me they made me bleed a little, soon I began to feel dizzy, my vision was bluring and I stumbled around. I was slowing down... just one more step I though to myself... just one... ju... j... j... Then I stumbled and fell off of the side of the platform. Splash! I hit the cold water and it caused me to wake up a bit, and I slowly climbed back up the side of the platform. I started running again and was almost at the top, the fleeches were still nipping at my legs. I accidently stepped on another foot switch, it released a scrab. Lucky for me, it noticed the fleeches before it noticed me, and they got in a fight, while I ran further up the platform. Finally, I was at the top, I entered the door and it led me out of the trial. When I was out of the trial room I found a meat sack hanging from the ceiling and grabbed a chunk of meat from it and ate it. Then I sat down on a rock and decided to get some rest before going on my next trial.
-to be continued-
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cool story 
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Glukkon Lulu
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