Mr.Bruss is a lot like that G-Man from the Half-Life series. Did you know that there was a character called Tank in an old Oddworld Fanfic? It was their nickname. It was the character Hak in the Jas story by Teal.
I like the story by the way, the escape plan was quite interesting. I think your fight sequences are well written and contain just the right amount of detail.
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