Yeh Josh,I was kinda going for that. Im glad people appreciate it.I posted the first chapter on a differnt site just to see what they thought and these were some of the comments i recieved:
Blows get out of here
What the hell are you talking about?
FAIL!
Learn how to write, Noob.
Well atleast you guys appreciate it. And this story is only on the oddworld forums.
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