A day in the life of oddworld.
This is a story im gonna write that will involve all the oddwold games so far.Constructive comments are welcome.I will post new chapters as i go.Bassically its gonna be like humans on oddworld except im gonna switch off in the enviroments.Like im in rupture farms.Then when i escape there ill be somewere else.I think you get the picture.
Chapter 1:Stranger
Ramp walked around the city.It was boring.He went home.He turned on the Tv and flicked to the news channel.His friend texted him earlier telling him to look.
Tv announcer:"Well thanks Tom.Now our Top story tonight,A Furry like man was seen running through the streets.He wore a old western style clothing.And it ran on all four legs.Any good information should be reported to your local Police departmant."
"Ughh." Moaned Ramp.He was tired of this fake crap that people kept saying.Then suddenly he heard a strange galloping noise.He walked to his door.He opened it and walked out."Hello?" He said.Still looking.Then he heard something drop down behind him.He turned around and faced the furry thing that was on the tv.Its green eyes looked at his in anger.Ramp's Eyes widened.He turned to run when he felt something grab the back of his shirt."PUT ME DOWN!" He yelled.He heard a swing then felt a sharp pain in the side of his head.Then he blacked out....
(what did you all think? should i continue? i am a starting writer so im sorry if it was bad..)
Last edited by Rampage48; 06-04-2009 at 10:53 PM..
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