I read your story and liked it because. Now, bonus points, please.
'Joke' aside, I liked this one. It did good to separate the different sections, yet they still form a whole and are connected to eachother. Another bunch of revelations created a good suspense, although we already knew about Dion's story. Can't wait to see the chapters where W@RF gets involved, but you're in no hurry.
As for constructive criticism, you should double-check your spelling. Words like 'fate', 'were' and some others. I noticed earlier that you sometimes mix 'here' and 'hear' as well (I guess it's not done on purpose).
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