No problem, I love reading this story. The prison section is really interesting.
I find Nox to be quite a good character, although he is plagued with the voices in his head. Does he ever get that sorted out at all? Or is it a permanent thing?
Nox's squad commander and Nox's new prison-mates seem to be the most heroic characters. However, I see you have given each character some specific flaws... which is great
The corruption is interesting as well, can't wait to see what happens next.