I'm getting into this. I always thought pack life was an interesting subject, and Sl'askia's stories always entertained me. Its nice to see somebody following her footsteps and writing about life in the great out doors of Oddworld as opposed to some generic 'mudokons-escape-from-slave-compound' fanfic that seems to end up being written over and over again. ^^
You might want to add a little more detail in your writing and do some quick research on how to survive as a predator in the wild (I found that just watching Survivor Man on Discovery Channel has helped me get an idea of the do's and dont's of outdoor life). Other than that, keep it up! I'll be reading. ^^
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