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04-04-2009, 02:26 AM
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Oddworld Crea's Oddysee

Okay, not the most original title but oh well. I was meaning to post this sooner but I've been busy. Anyway this is my first fanfic so tell me if it's okay!
(Nenes are creatures made up by me)



prologue

"A long time ago, we were one with nature, but then our ansestors discovered technology, they built many things such as computers, machinery... and weapons. soon are kind began to prosper... until we were betrayed by another species, they took everything from us and used it against us, making us slaves and completly destroying what little of our culture we had left.Then we did something so shameful, so disgusting, that it makes me retch to even think about it... we fled.
We ran, we left the world we had lived in for centuries, left our friends to be killed and tortured by the traitors, so we could save ourselves."
"My name is Crea and I am a Nene, i didn't know any of this until a few months ago. It began when I went for a walk, nothing special, just a simple walk, which is why i believed what happened is destiny as I am the only Nene who would dare leave the safety of the village just to go for a walk.Anyway, I found myself lost deep in a place of the forest I had never been in before and was looking around to see if I could figure out where I was when I tripped, this itself was not unusual as Nenes are extremely clumsy creatures and I especially am always falling over, but I fell down a deep whole in the ground, after recovering from the fall I discovered I was in a sort of under ground cavern, and on one of the cavern walls there was writing... and thats when i discovered everything, I discovered about the traitors, the ones known as the Glukkens. I discovered about our dear friends, the Mudokons and how we ourselves had betrayed them by leaving them to die in the hands of the Glukkens.
And I discovered that we, the nenes, are not from Evan at all, but from a different world, a world so cruel and evil, a world raged by war, a world known as.....

Oddworld.
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