Yes Moosh, your fanfic does invovle interns getting there arms/hands cut/ripped off by a vykker experiment/monster-type-thing. Except your fan-fic the monster isn't exactly invinceable but is very close. And involves the violent murder of tons of sligs, interns and vykkers... Unfair statement coming from you. What with Carl and all.
I don't really find this story stale, but I like the massive jump in time from the escape to the battalion destroying. Flashback-type-things are always cool so continue.