It's funny you should mention Mary Sue. This fanfic was written as a kind of 'dare', while I was talking to one of my fellow fanfiction writers
. But I admit, this story is getting a bit stale. I'm going to try and inject some life into it. In fact, this story deserves a semi-reboot. In the next chapter I'll go back and reveal how he was created. Then I'll continue with my new plotlines.
Basically, keep an eye on the Mudokon, you'll see him again soon
