I find that comment to be quite unfair actually. You've got plenty of violence in your fanfic, I can't see a gigantic leap in gore from my story and yours.
I'm still trying to think of a good plotline to tie in the immortality and strength.
I did warn there would be violence in this one.
Besides, why do people buy "Reservoir Dogs/Pulp Fiction/Mad World/Smash TV/Mortal Kombat" etc? There is a reason for everything. Just as you had a reason for commenting, I have a reason for writing this fanfic
