[Munch's Master]

I would also suggest- Dont edit it into the first post. Eventually you won't be able to edit again, and it also creates the dreaded Text Wall Of Doom like I did with my fic. Post chapters seperately. Another point- Spelling, Grammar and Punctuation can work wonders. Seriously. Always take the effort to capitalise the start of sentences, spell things right and use full stops, commas, etc., and use good grammar.