Firstly you should use a spell checker before posting your work to iron out any bad spellings like 'Ageing', the next thing I'd recommend would be recognizing when to use a comma and when to use a period. Too early to tell about the plot right now.
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“I always believe the movies I've made are smarter than the way they are perceived by sort of mass culture and by the critics,” Snyder said, a statement he immediately followed by saying, “Also, ‘It looks like a video game.’
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