[Nemo]

So I'm writing a book.

It's a sorta fantasy romance / political drama type thing. I've managed to nail the plot out, but I wanna know if it reads like shit.

Anyway:

There's a big sprawling city, sort Pre-Revolution France-inspired, where the opulent Elite live in a huge palace, and with hundreds of commoners around them. The Elite have over the years made themselves out as Godlike beings, who cannot be seen by the public. Every saturday night they impose a curfew, and anybody who is caught outside while they wander the city and hunt wild game through the streets is either executed or imprisoned, either way, it sucks balls.

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At the end of it, the King is exiled, the citizens wake up to a new leadership that tears down the old laws, and the Heroine ends up as Co-Queen.

Hmm, I dunno.

Also, lesbian sex.

Sold.




On a serious note, it sounds good. I'd probably skim through a few pages to see if I like it if I ever came across it in a library.