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WOW just WOW GlacierDragon!!! 
first of all the picture really rocks (oh and your new signature picture too  )
and then this chapter! I think that it's the best chapter in this story so far, it's verry imaginable, well it was imaginable before but now the story really lives beyond it's letters... so cool  it's really really good, just awesome, fabulous!!! You improved much in writing  |
Thanks! I'm glad you like the picture, and my new sig. It's good to hear I'm getting better at writing. I'll try my best to keep it throughout the rest of the story.
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... I think it's fun to see how the style of an internet fan fiction changes as it goes. I noticed it with my own and I think I've made some change for the better.
Nice picture... The mechanical arms on the colored pencil don't go too well though. Or at least in my opinion.
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Thank you. As I said before, it's good to know my writing is improving. And I agree with you about the digital arms not fitting with the traditional colouring. I'm not quite sure why I did that...