WOW just WOW GlacierDragon!!!
first of all the picture really rocks (oh and your new signature picture too

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and then this chapter! I think that it's the best chapter in this story so far, it's verry imaginable, well it was imaginable before but now the story really
lives beyond it's letters... so cool

it's really really good, just awesome, fabulous!!! You improved much in writing
