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11-03-2008, 09:02 AM
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ok first of all ...

*___* this chapter is really great and perhaps even one of my favorites in the whole story and the way you describe everything is still awesome.

I liked the second part better when he thinks of the past and that it turned out that he actually saved Tillic from Skillya, I really was waiting for something like that.

But the first part could fit a little bit better to the second one... though I like that it begins with that question of Dionysia (I don't know probably this is just me)

but all in all it is an excellent chapter!
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