sry for posting again but I couldn't edit my other post anymore but also couldn't wait untill you post the other chapter because I have read everything now and it's so cool ^-^ !
You described all the characters (and everything else too) so well and authentic
this story is now one of my favorite fanfictions at this forum (together with 2 others)
I also really like your writing style cuz it lets you imagine everything so well
your story is awesome Munch's Master! I hope the next chapter will come soon =)