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10-10-2008, 12:58 PM
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A good chapter; I did enjoy the description of Vula's job. The relationship growing between her and the slig is quite exciting (a little similar to the relationship forming betwen a slig and a mudokon in my story [/shameless_advertising]).

I was a little confused by how Vula was trying to keep her gender secret from the other mudokons and the glukkons, and yet Drog seemed to know she was a female anyway.
Oh, and a young slig is called a sliglet, not a larva.
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