Thank you so much for the comments. I really appreciate them.
Zozo: You're very right. I was in a big hurry to write that first chapter down when it was in my head (I can't organize it all on paper or else it won't be written), but that makes a lot of sense so I'll run back through it and fix the problems. Ahaha, my grammar and spelling is limited to high school experience. xDD
Splat: Drog does indeed have a background, but I haven't revealed that quite yet. But I'll throw some stuff in the next chapters to lead up to that, certainly.
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