Okay, not taking sides or anything. But:
It's a good base model but it does indeed lack a lot of detail still, even without the textures. Scrabs walk on claw like things and their torso could be better defined.
Being able to do 3D art is not a free ticket for people to adore you on the internet. There is a golden rule in the online art community which is this:
If you don't want to be criticized for your work then don't post it online.
Simple as that. There are too many people on DA for example that are in high heavens with every work they post receiving tons of OMG AWSOME comments and then get pissed or insulted if a serious artist comes along and points out some flaws.
Cyph3r is a very talented 3D designer, check out some of his work on the forum if you want. He is in a perfect position to tell you what could be better about your work and if you are wise you'll listen to what he has to say and try to do something with it.
Here's my tip, from one artist to another: Don't get hostile to someone the second they point out flaws and more importantly; NEVER EVER think you are better then someone else. You made the fatal mistake of assuming that just because you did something rare like 3D no-one else around here would have a clue. Never do that, not even if you KNOW you are better in terms of skills or experience, NEVER throw the 'well if think you can do it better' card. It makes you look so incredibly stupid it's not even funny anymore.
On that note, keep on working on this and don't let critique get you down. It's part of the process. Good luck!
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