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cool story i still like shrown better
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No offence, but this is the second chapter, how can you say that after the second chapter? -I think this story has got a great beginning and maybe it will become much better than Shrown is. (but I also like Shrown very much... oh well everyone has got his own opinions right?

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both stories are great

at the end we will see which one is the best
