Oh my god! Awesome ending! You could publish this! It's that good. Ever considered becoming a writer? You could be a really good one. An extremely good one. If this was an actual book I'd rank it as a book nearly as good as Lord of the Rings, Harry Potter and a book by a fouteen-year old called Eragon. I demand a sequal to this story and if I was wearing a hat I'd not only take it off to you, I'd give you it.
A Tale of Epidemic Proportians is my favourite fan fic and I think it'll take a pretty hard-core advesary to beat it. I guess now we're two who need to make a sequal now.
This is so worth making into a movie, a game, a ride at Universal studios, or an entire theme park. You go Mooshy!
MOAR.